Stephan-Desy  11/23/03 @896

Nice sketch. I like the goofy look of the model. Good technique.

Askhari  11/23/03 @911

wow, very proper, well done sketch. i like it

heartbeat  11/23/03 @969

Thanks for the comments.I was little afraid to post.

felisumbrarum  11/24/03 @187

Nice shading and expression!

arenhaus  11/24/03 @342

Pay attention to the general structure of the image *before* you add detail. You get the face all askew otherwise.

CountessZanne  11/24/03 @364

Wonderful expression in your rendering. Each element is nicely drawn from the hair to the eyes, however you need to think of everything as a whole. As Arenhous said, make sure you have the basic structure of the face down first and then build upon that. Good job.

heartbeat  11/24/03 @400

Thanks for the advices,I'll try to follow them.

RaZuZ  11/24/03 @443

there is something with the nose disturbing me...

heartbeat  11/24/03 @446

maybe the shade?

greenfeed  11/24/03 @549

goofy look ? ;o) this is good. nice job.

acidlullaby  11/24/03 @880

not your conventional portrait! I like it. ^_^

heartbeat  11/25/03 @460

thank you

velvetgoodnite  11/25/03 @552

She quite elfin. V ery nice pencil work. Keep at it.

volpe  11/29/03 @117

zdravej! very nice...I would suggest softening your hatchwork on the facial area by going over it with a soft cloth..it will unify your shaded areas, and you can go back into it to sharpen. great work and keep posting!

throwdown  01/15/04 @708

i agree with zdraveji. the is slighty harsh and prohibits the blending between the shadow and the light portins of her faces. other than that, great job. can wait to see the next one

throwdown  01/15/04 @709

i agree with zdraveji. the is slighty harsh and prohibits the blending between the shadow and the light portions of her faces. other than that, great job. can wait to see the next one

APertsev  02/14/04 @002

hi! nice pictures! happy valentines day!

sapandgr8  03/14/04 @465

there is some problem with the mouth portion i suppose but overall a sexy piece of work

Grafiker  04/11/04 @950

hmmm amazing +7

kelvin2500  11/27/04 @200

Ey, that was posted in 2003.... what about now? show us ur improvement...